Do janitors really have anything better to do than to repair windows? How does a high school prank end in murder? What does a turtle have to do with your safety? Did you know that a newspaper can save your life?
All of these questions will be answered... well maybe not answered... explained... somewhat... well that's not really true either. I guess they'll be at least glazed over in the first Video On Demand iRiff from Raven's Riffs. The first of the 2 shorts in this presentation is an antivandalism film from the 1970s called "Destruction: Fun or Dumb" and the second is "Duck & Cover," the instructional video presented to children in the 40s on how to protect themselves from a nuclear blast by falling down and covering their heads. Seriously... a NUCLEAR BLAST. It's 23 minutes of fun featuring some of the worst impressions in all of iriffs (don't say I didn't warn you).
Feedback greatly appreciated.
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Really Good Riffs
This is my first listen to raven's riffing.
The first short fun and dumb had some really great lines and impressions. Definitely worthy of an A in my books. Had me chuckling throughout the riff. Definitely the strongest riff of the two. Duck and cover had a few good moments and gets a B- for me. Still good riffing, just not as many laugh out loud moments.
There are a lot of memorable lines between the two riffs which is not that common when watching riffs for shorts. Heck, I've seen rifftrax shorts with far less memorable lines. With that said... anyone looking for a good solid short ought to check this one out. (btw- the audio quality was excellent. No problems there)
Thanks for the feedback.
Just wanted to thank you all for the feedback and let you know that I've uploaded a final version with the audio fixed (I missed a few spots when I did the ducking) and I cut off the stinger at the end of the video. It can now be found as a youtube clip here. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d2acxGRZlzA Please keep the feedback coming. Thanks again, -Raven
I'll say Fun
This video includes some good funny lines for the two shorts. Some that I liked were "Jack Nickleson's Window and Door", or the narrator saying "Vandalism is not limited to poor or city areas, or to boys", and the riff is "And here to illustrate this point, Two poor city boys" (that's what the video is showing at the time). I also liked the video showing a man ripping pages out of a book in the library, and the riff saying "This is how a book becomes a movie script!". ___p___
The technical issues are handled pretty well in this video iRiff. The sound is fine (except for a few points where the sound was pretty bad in the original video), and the video is nice and clear. I do wish the video was a bit larger (as far as screen size). It's a nice deal to include two shorts in a single iRiff, as that adds up to over 20 minutes of entertainment. But it might make sense to do this as two separate files for people to download, since people may want to watch either one of these videos without playing the other one at the same time. ___p___
As others have noted, the first video includes a song about "Hey is it fun, or just dumb?", and it is distressingly easy to get that song stuck in your head!
Perfect 10!
Worth watching several times... as a fan riff thats no small accomplishment. The jokes are cleaver and well written, yet Raven still brings it all at a rapid fire pace. The track is accessible for all audiences, and his references are spot on.
10/10 ... Great track!
Fantastic!
Very professional. At no point in time was I reminded I was listening to a "fan riff", which is the highest compliment I can give. Very wide range of references, about the only place you didn't go was making fun of the way people look. While I love that kind of stuff, I know a lot of people don't so I'm not even saying you made the wrong choice. Great job!
Excellent
Lots of fun from beginning to end. Wide range of references.
Antonym confusion
Not to mention confusion over how a nuclear blast wave works. Fabulous stuff, definitely worth a purchase.
Fun? Dumb? Can't it be both?
Really great stuff! While I felt the first short started things off a little slow, the second one knocked it out of the park! A fun viewing experience!
Ducked audio version uploaded
I added a version with the audio equalized better. The source audio is now turned down more when it competes with the Riff.
Protect Yourself From A Nuclear Attack NOW!
Very funny double feature with good and clever jokes. Adding the intros to each short was a very good idea that I had not seen anyone else do before. This one is on my iphone and I will be watching it alot. The only real suggestion for improvement would be to increase the volume on your riffs so that they are louder. Looking forward to more.
Funny funny stuff, between
Funny funny stuff, between the two shorts you definitely get your money's worth, though that Fun or Dumb song will haunt me for a long time to come now.
And yes, leave Tommy Dreamer out of this!