In space Grampy can't hear you scream... cause the space people took his hearing aid.
Call him Grampy, call him "Dirty Dipey" Callahan, but never call him while he's watching court tv, grampy gets cranky. In a futuristic post apocalyptic orwellian subterranean prehistoric waterworld their are no rules, except Grampy's rules. Grampy has fallen in love and he can't get up.. out of danger! Now he must fight the men that trained him by using a few "old" tricks. Grampy is..... "Be Human" Available in panoramicxray3dstereosurrounddolbyhotdogpotatosaladicecream vision.
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A funny first go! There were some parts that could have used pauses and you screamed too loud at some parts, but worth a buck overall.
i agree with Behonkiss' comments. overall good - i'm sure it takes some time to fall into a 'riffing groove'....i'm really enjoying all the variety we're getting thru iRiffs. it's going to be fun/interesting to watch the brave souls who put themselves out there and post their riffs for all to see - develop over time.
having said that, that was one crazy cartoon! wow! good first effort Cartoon Chaos - i look forward to seeing more of your riffs.
--the monkey
i can't get the html to work. i'm no expert - but i know my basics and they ain't a' workin'. any suggestions?
Thanks for the positive feedback, critiques, and any purchases fellas. I'll lower the amount of riffing and yelling volume down some notches in the next video if that's what we want.
monkey, I'm not sure what your referring to, can you be more specific?
hi cartoon!
i was referring to the html not working in my posts...is that the thing you were referring to that i was referring to? this is totally off the the topic of riffs - but i can't get the html commands to work - no 'bold' or 'italics' more importantly, i can't get it to 'break' or start a new paragraph - they aren't breaking automatically like it says down there at the bottom. is it just me? it's usually just me....--monkey
*head explodes * j/k, I know what you mean, my comment paragraphs are also unbreakable. Much like Bruce Willis was in that one movie, which title escapes me.
I loved it, probably the most unique style in iRiffs right now . Favorite Riff: A tie between "Perhaps a haymaker would be more to your liking" and "Betty, why are you laughing so much? Oh, that's right, because someone was HIT BY A CAR!"